It’s nothing much,
Just a feeble try to convey how deeply I felt,
Words that so easily get my heart to melt,
If only there was a way to put it all away,
And start afresh the next day.
I know you are trying to relate,
And that’s the reason I put my heart on this god damned slate,
These words might stick to you or not,
Yet a piece of me definitely stays out there to rot.
It’s a writer’s pain etched in stone,
Crushing the wound into the very bone,
Does it pain to read the way it pained to write?
Or was this a fateful defeat I had to fight?
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This is awesome! Exactly how I feel as a writer lol. Nice rhythm as well!
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Thank you
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Beautiful❤
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Beautiful 😍
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I love “These words might stick to you or not, Yet a piece of me definitely stays out there to rot…” I get it.
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I am glad you could relate
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Thanks a lot for the kind words
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Wow
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It’s really what a writer face everytime. Interesting ❤
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Glad you could relate
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Wow, a very sombre perspective
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Thank you
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This is awesome! I love it.
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“It’s a writer’s pain etched in stone,
Crushing the wound into the very bone,”
Bravo!! 👏
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I loved it, thanks for sharing ! 🙂
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I feel the same way. And I hate writing rhymes. Sometimes they come naturally. And I can’t concentrate at all right now.
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Hope to read more from you. Thanks a lot and have a nice weekend.
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Nicely penned
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Wonderfully penned.
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Writing really is painful. You’ve captured that. I love it!
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I feel you. I know this emotion. Well penned. Hope to read more from you.
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Beautifully penned the pain of a writer…
I loved it 💖
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Thanks for this, I know its part of the writing process. But ‘editing’ is very painful. To be confronted with your own writing and to have it reflected back is….ouch! Maybe its just me?
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💎🙌🏾
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Awesome! Does it pain to read the way it pained to write? Magical.
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Mishra, I felt your line “Does it pain to read the way it pained to write?” I know what this means and how does it feel. I myself spend 16 hours straight of composing pain like a woman in labour, but when I read what I’ve wrote the next day, I found myself asking: “Why is it so damn easy to read an entire chapter than to write it?” So, yeah, that line goes into my memory.
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Thank you for writing this heartwrenching poem!
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can relate to this as much!
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Beautiful!
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Wow, fantastic blog layout! How long have you been blogging for? you make blogging look easy. The overall look of your website is fantastic, let alone the content!
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I’ve been doing it for over 3 years!
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