I wish I could have you here with me,
Hold your hand as and when I please,
Hug you tight when I feel incomplete,
A life without complications is all I plead,
Things would be so easy indeed.
To love and care for you is all I seek,
Be your go-to person at any time during the week,
Hold your hand and hold you tight,
Never ever let you out of my sight.
I feel I’m perfect for you and no one else is close,
I’d love you with all I have and this nobody can oppose,
I think what stops you is the fact that I’m not your type,
But has any other guy before been worth the hype?
What I think you need is someone who makes you feel loved,
Someone who makes you realize what you’re worth,
Someone who puts an effort in you and your wellbeing,
Someone who makes you realize you’re worth cherishing,
Someone who will never get tired of all your cribbing,
Someone who adores you and your fussy eating.
I adore you so much it makes me insecure,
Cause I know it’s not going to be long before someone figures out your allure,
People don’t see it now cause you’re in a carbon state,
Put through some tests and it’ll reveal your diamond ways.
Sometimes I feel the dark and repeal the light,
No vision in my deemed eyes,
Lost in thought so scared inside,
Wishing you were here to hug me and say it’s alright.
Nice work!!! Lovely thoughts… Kudos 🙂
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Good one!
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This is amazing 😭❤️
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I swear if I was in that balloon I would pass out. Lol. Breathtaking views aside. 😁
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It’s so relatable for me! Awestruck! Felt like I was reading my own emotions!
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Glad you like it 🙂
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So good.
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Thank you 🙂
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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I love your style of writing! I am reading through your poems and I really like them all!
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Thank you so much!
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Love this! Love when someone sees the diamond in carbon
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Thank you for those kind words 🙂
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The “Someone who…” lines are heartwarming. This is beautiful.
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Thank you so much 😄
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Seems you’re in love with someone & she is either unaware or not acknowledging coz probably she is shy or scared..
Nice work. The Beginning is awesome. 🙂
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You’re as right as can be!
What you say is my life in as many words right now 🙂
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🙂
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I wish you success in getting the love of your life and I wish both of you happiness and togetherness.
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Thank you so much, you’re really kind 🙂
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Are you an Indian ?
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Yes I am.
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Ok. 🙂
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Beautiful but so poignant
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
BALLOONING EXPECTATIONS—-REALIZED!
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Fingers crossed you will one day have all your heart desires. Beautiful writing, thank you!
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Thank you so much 😄
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Well done 👍 t
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Thank you 🙂
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Most welcome 🤗😁🙏
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Please follow me back 😁🙏
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Poem has all the feels… nicely penned…
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Thank you so much 😄
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You’re welcome…
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It’s all good here beyond the Realm. I welcome your diamond eyes as they perceive as is, was or will ever be. Your wordplays bring out the poetry within. It’s not magic or sorcery; as we would agree, Words have Power. To move and shake Up trees, populations and mere humans like us 3! The ones lucky enough to read these hopeful diatribes. Poetry and the power of spoken thoughts, it can try to stop 🛑 ✋ speaking tomorrow morning to me. I probably will 😢 cry and ask “Words, words I am so Sorry; Words, Please, I beg of you! NEVER DESERT ME!”
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I am enthralled by the thought patterns and the line construction. Great work!
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Thank you so much 😄
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much 😄
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Touching and intimate, I love it. Thank you for sharing this little gem.
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Thank you so much 😄
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Beautiful was my first thought ❤️ This is nice
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Thank you so much 😄
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Beautiful 👍🙂
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Thank you 😄
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This was beautiful and really well written. There was a rhythm to it, and it’s lovely.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Great concept 👍
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Thank you 😄
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I love the emotional language used here. Nice work!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Anytime🤗
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Wow. Wow. Wow. This was striking. It was direct. The desperation in your lines was nearly tangible. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Amazing ⭐
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Thank you 🙂
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Wonderful
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NICE!!
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Thank you 🙂
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This is beautifully composed! The abundance of emotions in this verse is just magical 🙂
And thank you for stopping by my little blog.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you 😄
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😊
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This is such a heartwarming poem ^_^
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