I remember you smiling everyday,
A smile that took my breath away.
I remember your laugh so contagious,
Effortlessly lifting my mood so serious.
I remember your scent so beautiful,
The strings of my heart it’d pull.
I remember your hair so pretty,
It’d flip my day so shitty.
I remember the human being that you are,
Loving you has left me a forever scar.
I remember the night we said our goodbyes,
Lightening and rain pouring from those heavenly skies.
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Beautiful.. πππΌ
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Thank you π
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Beautiful π
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I will remember your poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much π
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Beautiful piece!
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Thank you π
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Most welcome!
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you so much π
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very romantic piece, great stuff!
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Wow! So well written!
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much π
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The bitter-sweet experience is well captured and conveyed. What you have expressed is part of life and is to be embraced.
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So true! We all carry such scars in remembering someone.
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You do indeed!
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I’m always trying to understand your blog name. travel-on-ather; travel-a-lone-other. Can you say how you came about it please and put me out of my misery π
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Iβm a traveler who runs marathons.
So travel + marathoner = travellothoner π
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I thought this a lovely piece.
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Thank you π
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I love this β€οΈ
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I am glad you like it π
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Nice poem!
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Beautiful poem.
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Beautifully penned Indian!
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A lovely peice. Great use of words and writing style! Cheers!
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Thank you π
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