It’s been a while since I’ve been struggling with my words,
They once flew freely like a flock of birds.
You were my biggest source of inspiration,
The happiest part of my vocation.
It’s been over a year since we last met,
You’re a part of my happiest memories and some desperate regrets.
I’ve imagined saying goodbye to you a million times,
I wrote about you repeatedly in my many rhymes.
I am probably an idiot to still hold on to hope,
I just want you to be a part of my trope,
Walk together on this uphill slope.
Oh this feels…
I hope you are well
Take care.🌸
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Thank you 🙂
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Saying goodbye doesn’t mean you stop feeling and you’ve conveyed that very well 🤗
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I love those last lines. When in love, we give up caring if we look like fools or not. More importantly, true love will “walk that uphill slope together” no matter what. Great poem!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I can totally relate to your words here.
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I am so glad to hear that!
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i love this
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Thank you 🙂
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I hope the words continues to soar along side the love you’re in search of.
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Thank you for your wishes. I hope so too!
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“I am probably an idiot to still hold on to hope” we all are idiots
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I guess we are!
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Funny how time can be compressed like that. I’m glad you are still seeing so much positivity in everything (and bringing so much to others).
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That is all I wish to do. Be positive and spread positivity!
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You do an absolutely fantastic job. No doubt.
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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My pleasure
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much 😄
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Its a lovely piece, lovely
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Thank you so much 😄
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This is so beautiful and don’t quench hope’s light
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Thank you!
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Sometimes the heart doesn’t know how to or when to stop…it wants what it wants!
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Yup. It wants what it wants!
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Hope your heart’s desire gets fulfilled.
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I hope so too!
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Poignant!!
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So beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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This is nice, the upward slope… I feel the depth here . 🌟
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Bittersweet goodbyes.
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We all are holding onto our hope. Beautifully written! 😊
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Nice
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Relatable
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We should all be more idiotic some times ❤️
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I agree with you 🙂
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Saving this post when that day arrives.
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I feel this at every level xx
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I am glad you can resonate with my words.
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This resonates – great poem.
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Thank you so much 😄
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This one made me wanna cry! It was so beautiful!💖 all the emotion made me feel the intensity! You did it so well! 🙌😍
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Thank you so much ☺️❤️
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Resonates 100 % therefore, let that hope go. Its only taking away our pieces, leaving us with holes. And no matter what we do these holes will just not get filled unless that hope doesnt go away. This kind of hope just takes us away from own ourselves. Let it go!!
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I try. It’s not the letting go that’s difficult. It’s the fear that you probably won’t feel the same way about someone else again 😓
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I know, that fear can make you feel like the sky is falling down on you. But trust me, I know this fear closesly, lived in it for lonnnnng years. But, this kind of hope just makes things worse. You yourself will break your pieces and no one else will be around to fix you in this. This kind of hope doesn’t give much in return, but takes away too much. And before you even realise you will find it difficult to even remember who you were and what exactly you wanted your life as. I hope you find your own light soon, I know the sleepless nights, the constant voices in mind trust me they will only go, when you leave this hope. Good luck, I hope this battle is easy on you. Just dont miss your pieces in this storm. Good luck !!! I know you will be able to see your own sunshine, your own waves of ocean, your own moonshine. 🤗
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I can tell you’ve gone through this personally, so I hope you’re healing or have healed well. And thank you so much for your words, I’ll never forget them 🤗
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You are welcome. I know, I blurted out too much. But I really hope you heal soon too. For me, every day is a new fight, but I have envisioned my light. 🤗
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This is really beautiful. Hope is always rewarded.
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I hope so. Thank you so much 😄
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There will always be more fish in the sea. Some will get away. Some will be snagged. The object to life is to keep on fishing. 🙂
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I wish I had been reading you sooner, I have been playing catch up. It is strange, it is like we are on opposite sides of the same coin, I also had someone I cared for that I decided to let go, or we let each other go, I am unsure at this point but it seems that your poems seemed to detail the same journey we were on. Ironically you share the same birthday. I hope you will continue you writing, because even though I am on the far side of the globe from you, your words speak to me as if whispered on my pillow at night. Straight into my heart. He was always…a well maybe someday, but never the reality.
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Thank you so so much 🙂
You are too sweet!
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❤️❤️❤️
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Great love poem with great rhyme flow
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Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem and for the like 😉
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