I knew the day we met
That we were meant to be.
I knew our fate was set,
That you were the one for me.
I didn’t even know you,
I only knew your name.
I wasn’t sure what to do,
I didn’t know who to blame.
I knew I found you attractive,
I could tell that you were nice.
My belly butterflies were so active
That I couldn’t think twice.
Everything I did that day
Didn’t show you who I was.
Every time you came my way
My heart took a pause.
My actions weren’t natural,
My reactions weren’t real.
I felt so very terrible,
But my heart I did not wield.
And when the group said goodbye to me,
My eyes were fixed on you.
I knew I was trying to see,
If you felt the same way too.
I liked you when I saw your face,
But maybe it was the touch.
My heart had begun to race,
I already liked you too much.
Everything was simple,
Everything was fine.
I knew I couldn’t have you,
And I knew why.
I knew the day we met,
That we were meant to be.
I knew our fate was set
As friends, as lovers, as enemies.
You’re so fluid in your poetic skills. Loved it!
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Before the last 2 poems you wrote, that once again spoke to me, I wrote a poem in your honor. Today is the day I will post, I’ll make sure to tag you.
May your beautiful words continue to reach people’s eyes…and reach more and more.
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Thank you so much!
I am so glad you can resonate with my words… Looking forward to read your poem 🙂
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I loved this poem so much! Your writing and rhyming skills continue to wow me! Keep up the great work!
❤ Abi Lyn
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Thank you so much!
Your kind words motivate me to write more 🙂
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❤
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Love this ans can relate to the feelings!
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I am glad you can resonate with my words, thank you 😄
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oohh this is quite lovely 💕
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Thank you 😄
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So beautiful words… Fluid, nice, clear poetry. I would love to read more and more!
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Thank you so much 😄😄
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this is nice! I really like it. kinda have this kind of situation going on myself.
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loved the lines and relatable to me.
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Thank you so much 😄
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You have such a great flow! Love it! And I bet many of us can relate with your lyrics. 🙂
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Yes a lot of people have said so!
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Wow this was absolutely amazing! I love it
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Thank you so much 😄
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That last paragraph clinched it for me
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Thank you 😄
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Ah, romance. Loved it. The world needs more, every day.
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I agree with you!
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Wow, beautiful poem ❤
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Thank you 😄
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I love the flow, it’s simple but beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Somehow we know so many things, but believe so little. Believe more, know less ❤️
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Sweet and imaginative!
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Thank you 🙂
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Interesting. I liked it
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re very welcome. Thank you for the likes
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You’re welcome 😄
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Love it! Are you open to a suggestion? If not, I get it.
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Yes, sure!
Please do tell 🙂
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I like the idea of wielding your heart. The image of that is awesome. My brain wanted to play with the concept of yielding. “But my heart would not yield.” But I’m so torn between those two concepts. They both appeal to me.
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I like that approach. To be honest, it did not even occur to me 😅😅
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Enemies? Eek!
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The bitter sweet kind. Not literally!
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Whew! (I think) 🙂
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So well penned. Loved the alternating rhyme.
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Thank you so much 😄
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Beautiful lyrical poetry. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Wow. The journey you took us on is just incredible.
I look forward to seeing how your work continues to evolve, and judging by all these wonderful comments, I’m certainly not the only one. Speechless.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. They inspire me to write more and more 🙂
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that’s a sweet poem would you post a comment on my story named Daddy’s anger thanks
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Would you like my post name the butterfly please and thank
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Wow! I love it. So smooth and soothing
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Thank you so much 🙂
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This awesome .❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Thank you 😄
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Wow! Enjoyed reading this 😊
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You could sing this, put some chords to it, like The Everly Brothers, an American duo 1960ish. Hope you don’t mind this. Oh well.
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I’ll definitely try it out 🙂
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Playing with romance makes you a master poet. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Wao 😍
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Very nice, wonderful expression of feelings.
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Thank you 😄
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Your rhyming is fantastic! I liked this
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Thank you so much 😄
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This is beautifully penned
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Thank you so much 😄
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An honest, lyrical expression of feelings!
thank you for sharing!!!
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Thank you 😄
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Wow. Friends, lovers and enemies. Now that’s honesty. Unfortunately, that often becomes the truth.
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Wonderfully crafted poem! It was a pleasure to meet up with your words.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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