She was like art,
And art wasn’t meant to make you feel good.
It was meant for you to feel something deep within you.
Or maybe she was like water.
And water wasn’t meant to be stunning,
It was meant to quench your thirst.
And that is exactly what she did to me,
Made me feel something deep within and quench my soul’s thirst.
-The Travellothoner
Bombay Ficus 
Wow-Great one
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This is beautiful!
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You’re most welcome
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A great, thought provoking poem! 🙂 ❤
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Simple and stunning. What a combo! 💖
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Poignantly beautiful! 🙂
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brilliant !
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👌…
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Beautifully portraited!
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This is only the second poem of yours that I have read, and don’t get me wrong, but I want to be in your head – for a little inspirational thinking help. You really know how to write poetry that touches the heart.
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I honestly just write the way I feel. I think about the person I am writing about, and try to rhyme some words in it. I am an amateur at this!
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That’s all we can hope for in life…to have our thirst quenched. A great poem my friend.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Your poem is totally lovely. thanks for stopping by my poems so I could find out how to see yours. Very nice to meet you, so to speak.
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Indeed, a good combination. I enjoyed reading this.
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Lovely 💚
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What does the soul thirst for?
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I wish I had a precise answer for that!
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perhaps i’ve seen her
in a museum 🙂
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Reblogged this on Letters To My Mum – Translation: Random Thoughts of a Middle-Aged Mad Woman and commented:
This is exactly the way I feel about a recent encounter with someone…I thought it was deeper, but really he simply quenched the thirst I had lost for a long time that is now gone. Thank you.
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I am so glad you can resonate with my words. Thank you so much for appreciating them 🙂
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Love IT!
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Thank you so much 😃
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This is so beautiful!
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Wow I really connect with this piece! 🌸 Very well written. I’ll follow your blog! 😊
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Thank you for the lovely words 🙂
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Loved the comparisons! Your economy with words made the expression more powerful. Keep writing!
Would appreciate your written feedback on my poems.
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I am an amateur writer. I don’t think my feedback would account for much. But I will definitely give it a read 🙂
Thank you so much for stopping by my blog!
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Awesome posts.. had me stuck here all this while.. to follow your blog for sure.. keep soaring high.. 👍🏼😇✌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind words 🙂
It is very motivating!
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Pleasure all mine.. 😇😇
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Great poem. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome, dear 😊
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Lovely read
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Inspired by eleanor and park?
I enjoyed:)
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Yes a little bit. Thank you 🙂
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So beautiful
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Very pensive
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Lovely poem! Very well written
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Very touching, lovely deep words. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for your kind words and for stopping by 🙂
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So so beautiful!
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Liked this one. Liked the layout as well.
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No problem :).
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really nice one!! i felt a second about my girl.
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I am so glad you could resonate with my words 🙂
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Simple and sweet. Even I am trying to collect my thoughts and frame some good one. Thanks for following me.
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This is so beautifully written, thanks for sharing 🙂
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Beautiful poetry!
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Reblogged this on Rw's Random Blog and commented:
Touching poetry your right it suppose to make you feel something inside your soul.
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Nice peace.
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Very nice
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I remember me.. clford2121
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Awesome🔥
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The last stanza nailed it all💯
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Wow, what a fabulous analogy! Thanks for dropping by my little nest and drawing me to yours 🙂
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Wow! i loved this .
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Thank you ☺️
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A poem explaining the beauty of your thoughts and soul.. great post..lovely..😁😁
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My pleasure..😁😁😁😁
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Very lyrical— written in streams of consciousness. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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wow-wow-May we find soul stirring experiences,events, people in life to give it a meaning!!
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Wonderful imagery! And even more wonderful writing
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Thank you so much 😄
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Simply beautiful.
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Beautiful😍
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Thank you so much 🙂
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