A state where you don’t care about yourself anymore,
A state where all your worries go to rest.
A state where your entire world changes for a few hours,
A state where being vulnerable feels the best.
A state of unknown tranquility and peace,
A state so powerful to put everything at ease.
A feeling of powerlessness at the lack of control,
A feeling of loneliness in a world so whole.
A feeling like taking a bullet doesn’t feel too much,
A feeling where logic simply goes to rust.
An emotion that can cause centuries of destruction,
An emotion that makes you feel invincible.
An emotion that demands the best in you,
An emotion that is experienced only by a lucky few.
A human that becomes your entire world,
A human that bares your heart so souled.
A human that makes you question yourself,
A human that completes your inadequate self.
Call it a state, an emotion, a feeling or something new,
Endless synonyms for a word with letters so few.
The ones who’ve felt it can’t describe it all,
The ones left out desperate to experience the fall.
-The Travellothoner
❤️ it!
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Yes, wonderful expression of our living darkness,
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Oh I love this!
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Thank you 🙂
I am glad that you do!
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Great!
Lovely Great!
That’s All!
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Thank you 🙂
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“Endless synonyms for a word with letters so few.” – Beautifully perfect description.
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Thank you so much!
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Fabulous post
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Please read my first post
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It is lovely!
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Travellothoner I wanna thank you for reading all. Well basically all of my lyrics and statements if you will … It’s greatly appreciated and would like to possibly chat with you sometime … ?
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Sure!
You could leave your email id in contacts 🙂
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Exostid22@gmail.com is my e-mail
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Powerful words
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Thank you 🙂
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😊
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This is wonderful.
❤
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I enjoyed the poem. I like your blog. I like it all. And I appreciate your like in my post.
BTW Just out of curiosity? Did you read the post Life And Death Go On …? in https://www.thia-basilia.com/ or did you only like the notice in https://thiabasilialicona.wordpress.com/2019/02/26/life-and-death-go-on/?
I am trying to see what works for my readers and for myself. Plus I find it peculiar that I never get any likes or comments in https://www.thia-basilia.com/ and wonder why?
Could you kindly let me know? Thanks. Much love, thiaBasilia 🙂
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Very poignant and powerful.
❤ – Thank you
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Thank you so much 🙂
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“A feeling like taking a bullet doesn’t feel too much”
Most powerful line in this poem
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Thank you 😊
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Ah, how nice this is! In April my husband and I will celebrate our 58th wedding anniversary. I can still attest to this kind of love you captured in your poem, here. LOVE is a blessing from our Creator, I would say. A gift that keeps on giving through the years. Everlasting LOVE.
I also want to say “thank you” for your visit to my blog today, too. You inspire me so much ~ Lynda McKinney Lambert, PA author and visual artist.
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderful write!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much!
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A poem I want to frame. Amazing😘🌹
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Thank you so much 😊
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Amazing!! 😊
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Fantastic!
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Thank you 🙂
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i felt every line. Amazing job done.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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This is so inspiring.. loved reading !
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Unfulfilled love hurts, fulfilled love brings fear, of probably being lost
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I’m going to wait until it happens to realize 🙂
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God bless….May yours be fulfilled!
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Thank you so much!
All the best to you too 🙂
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Nice
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Thank you 🙂
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Hi thetravellothoner. Think mine was always lust! Thank you for calling by and liking “How! and Each Day!”#TheFoureyedPoet.
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❤️
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“The ones who have felt it cannot describe it all”. I hope that you keep trying. A lovely poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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“An emotion that demands the best in you,
An emotion that is experienced only by a lucky few.”
The first characterization is familiar & rings true. The second is probably inaccurate.
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 🙂
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The last lines just left me speechless
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I enjoyed every line! Beautiful work!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautifully written! Love can bring out the best and the worst in us and the way we perceive the world can change from black to white… and there is so little self control, that sometimes we don’t even know ourselves anymore.
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I know that feeling, I can relate totally!
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Very true
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simple and beautiful 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Could you give me some tips to write such poetic verses on abstract word like trust friendship love sanity etc
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Honestly, I just write the way I feel. It’s a very impromptu action. I can never plan it. And I read a lot of books, so the words sort of come together after all the reading. I hope that helps.
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Love is surely the way to victory. She gives her all…yes love does that! Kudos to you thetravellothoner.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A feeling where logic simply goes to rust —- so wonderfully described ❤
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Absolutely true. For me love is a state where you put the other person first. No matter what.
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Yes, I can totally relate to that!
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Not everybody who writes is as good as you are. Glad to have come across your blog.
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Thank you so much!
You are too kind 🙂
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I am being honest. You deserve the praise. I gotta say the name you got here “thetravellothoner” is interesting
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome. Keep writing simple yet intricate pieces. Stay blessed. (I am sorry I don’t know your name. I usually say stay blessed and then the name. So please manage.)😂🙂
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Haha thank you so much 🙂
Good luck to you too!
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Okay, so, this poem is ….. for a lack of a better word, so honest. So raw.
Just, wow. The poem’s so… understanding and feeling.
It’s exquisite.
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Thank you 😄
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